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David Medinnus




> I searched for "Secret Invasion" on Google Images, and found this website: http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.superpouvoir.com/Team/Marv/Skrulls_by_leinilyu.jpg&imgrefurl=http://forum.superpouvoir.com/showpost.php%3Fp%3D194500%26postcount%3D20&h=713&w=551&sz=82&hl=en&start=2&um=1&tbnid=gqryQlAOg-CiBM:&tbnh=140&tbnw=108&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsecret%2Binvasion%26svnum%3D10%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26rlz%3D1T4GZHZ_enUS244US244%26sa%3DN
>
> It seems there's a post by Mr. Yu himself. Take it for what it's worth.

Actually, its kind of cool, except that one would think that a Skrull would find armor harnesses restricting, unless their espionage unit has already stolen the formula for Unstable Molecules.


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emerick man




> > I searched for "Secret Invasion" on Google Images, and found this website: http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.superpouvoir.com/Team/Marv/Skrulls_by_leinilyu.jpg&imgrefurl=http://forum.superpouvoir.com/showpost.php%3Fp%3D194500%26postcount%3D20&h=713&w=551&sz=82&hl=en&start=2&um=1&tbnid=gqryQlAOg-CiBM:&tbnh=140&tbnw=108&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsecret%2Binvasion%26svnum%3D10%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26rlz%3D1T4GZHZ_enUS244US244%26sa%3DN
> >
> > It seems there's a post by Mr. Yu himself. Take it for what it's worth.
>
> Actually, its kind of cool, except that one would think that a Skrull would find armor harnesses restricting, unless their espionage unit has already stolen the formula for Unstable Molecules.

It was a cool find too. Too bad I don't parlez francais...


Mephisto didnt remove memory of the MJ/Spidey kiss ;\)



Tried the YAHOO! translator on the whole page page1(attached) worked but page 2 didn't:
http://forum.superpouvoir.com/showthread.php?t=7509&page=2
Page 8 might be interesting to translate too: Alors du coup, je me choppe un previews et je fais la liste des 20 premiers titres.

According to http://www.french-linguistics.co.uk/dictionary/ 'par' means 'by' so this was an interesting snippet from page 4 there:
Quelques mots de l'éditeur Tom Breevort sur le premier épisode de cette série limitée, Secret Invasion :

Citation:
Posté par Tom Breevort
Here’s some feedback on SECRET INVASION #1, all relatively easy stuff to nip and tuck. This issue came together nicely.

1) From Nick Lowe on SWORD:

S.W.O.R.D. isn’t a wing or subsidiary of S.H.I.E.L.D. or the US gov’t. It’s a completely separate entity that has worked with S.H.I.E.L.D. on occasion. They’re an intergalactic peace-keeping organization that doesn’t operate under any government or world’s control. In ASTONISHING, Brand mentions to Maria Hill that the only reason that S.H.I.E.L.D. knows that S.W.O.R.D. exists is because of her relationship with Nick Fury.

Possible solution- Rather than an inspection, Dugan’s reason for coming to the Peak (what the ship is called) could be one of a regular meeting they’ve set up to share information. It could still be special that it’s Dugan coming (maybe Maria Hill is the usual rep from S.H.I.E.L.D.) and I could imagine that Brand has a prior relationship with Dugan since she had one with Fury. And I could also imagine a few of the S.W.O.R.D. agents being really into meeting him.

Agent Brand’s characterization- She’s not really an excited school girl. She’s a sarcastic, all-business, hard-ass who has little time for…anything, really. But, like I said before, I could see that she and Dugan might have a positive relationship. But we usually treat her like she’s the one with the knowledge. She doesn’t ask questions too much. One place in particular that I might ask for a simple change would be reversing the dialogue on pages 18-19 panel 5 so that the agent asks the question and Brand answers it. The only other thing that I might ask is that Brand, rather than radioing the Helicarrier, might be trying to radio S.W.O.R.D. HQ and it might be jammed by XXX XXXXXX.

2) Tony seems very casual about leaving the autopsy—which is about the most important thing he’s dealing with right now—to go chase the XXXXXX XXX, which is also important. So perhaps he should indicate that he’ll continue to monitor their progress remotely from his armor while en route, just so it doesn’t feel so much like he left two guys he can’t 100% trust alone with his only clue to the conspiracy. Also, a minor thing, you indicate that Tony has his helmet off in this scene, yet we see his POV from within the suit. So he should keep his helmet on for this to work.

3) Minor point on Page 12, Iron Fist has been in the Savage Land before, so maybe give this line to Echo.

4) I expect it’s all a matter of space, but Luke and company respond almost too quickly and too positively to XXXXXXX XXXX's call. They know XXXX stole the body and XXXX XX XXXXX XXXX XX, and they know they’re all wanted men, and that the Mighty Avengers have tried to ambush them at least once before. And yet, Luke immediately jumps to act on the info without even considering that this could be a set-up. So maybe what we need somewhere in here is a line that indicates that XXXX’s info might be shady, but that this is important enough to take the risk on.

5) The Marvel Boy scene in the Cube doesn’t really link up properly with where we left him at the end of CIVIL WAR. At that point, he had liberated himself, and taken over the Cube. I think this is easy enough to address, though—it just means that Marvel Boy isn’t in his cell when XXX XXXXX XXXX, but is instead in the Warden’s quarters, or some other place of authority. And maybe he needs some sort of “It’s time.” Kind of sentiment as he heads towards the hole in the wall and his destiny.

6) I’m not sure the connection between XXX XXX and XXXXX exploding connects clearly enough. All we see is XXX XXX XXXXXX XXX XXX XXX and then the base goes up. I think we need to see some sort of minor action—his pressing a button or something—that makes it a hair more obvious that he’s responsible for the detonation as a suicide bomber. Or even him saying “As it was written…” like the other Skrull agents.

7) When XXX XXXXXXXX XXXX is expanding into XXX XXXXXX XXXXXXXX, I think it would be a good idea to clarify the visual you’re looking for a little bit, so that Leinil draws the right thing. Are pieces of the building just disappearing, as though a bite has been taken out of them? Is there strange crackling XXXXX-energy seeming to consume parts of the building? How do you see this working?

8) Just to make sure that Leinil can draw it properly, in the sequence when the XXXXXX XXX opens and the XXXX XXXXXX come out, I think it would be helpful to specify when it’s X XXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX, XXXXXX XXXX XXX XXXXXXX XXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX.

So far, so good!

Tom B




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MarkTJohnson




> I searched for "Secret Invasion" on Google Images, and found this website: http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.superpouvoir.com/Team/Marv/Skrulls_by_leinilyu.jpg&imgrefurl=http://forum.superpouvoir.com/showpost.php%3Fp%3D194500%26postcount%3D20&h=713&w=551&sz=82&hl=en&start=2&um=1&tbnid=gqryQlAOg-CiBM:&tbnh=140&tbnw=108&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsecret%2Binvasion%26svnum%3D10%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26rlz%3D1T4GZHZ_enUS244US244%26sa%3DN
>
> It seems there's a post by Mr. Yu himself. Take it for what it's worth.

The Armor brings to mind Galactus' armor. Wonder what that means.
Personally, I'm waiting for the Impossible Men invasion.

Mark "What? Everybody ELSE that is green has invaded lately." Johnson


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pariscub




> > > I searched for "Secret Invasion" on Google Images, and found this website: http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.superpouvoir.com/Team/Marv/Skrulls_by_leinilyu.jpg&imgrefurl=http://forum.superpouvoir.com/showpost.php%3Fp%3D194500%26postcount%3D20&h=713&w=551&sz=82&hl=en&start=2&um=1&tbnid=gqryQlAOg-CiBM:&tbnh=140&tbnw=108&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsecret%2Binvasion%26svnum%3D10%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26rlz%3D1T4GZHZ_enUS244US244%26sa%3DN
> > >
> > > It seems there's a post by Mr. Yu himself. Take it for what it's worth.
> >
> > Actually, its kind of cool, except that one would think that a Skrull would find armor harnesses restricting, unless their espionage unit has already stolen the formula for Unstable Molecules.
>
> It was a cool find too. Too bad I don't parlez francais...
>
>
> Mephisto didnt remove memory of the MJ/Spidey kiss ;\)
>
>
>
> Tried the YAHOO! translator on the whole page page1(attached) worked but page 2 didn't:
> http://forum.superpouvoir.com/showthread.php?t=7509&page=2
> Page 8 might be interesting to translate too: Alors du coup, je me choppe un previews et je fais la liste des 20 premiers titres.
>
> According to http://www.french-linguistics.co.uk/dictionary/ 'par' means 'by' so this was an interesting snippet from page 4 there:


I speak fluent French. I'm French, after all. and believe me, apart from the Tom Brevoort quote, the rest is nothing more than you would find in the Nesarama forums. No piece of news that we haven't heard anywhere else, just speculations.




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Brand Echh




Looking at the image again, I'm convinced Spider-Woman is a Skrull.

We know Iron Man isn't a Skrull, since that would negate Civil War (although give them just One More Day, and I bet they would)...... and Spider-Woman is clearly doing a seductive (and reversed gender) version of the serpent tempting Eve.

I'll bet she's whispering sweet nothings in his ear, helping him see Skrulls where there are none, and none where there are Skrulls.

> Citation:
> Posté par Tom Breevort
> Here’s some feedback on SECRET INVASION #1, all relatively easy stuff to nip and tuck. This issue came together nicely.

Huh? Is the following stuff spoilers from Secret Invasion #1 or a different issue? I didn't even think the issue had been drawn yet.


> 1) From Nick Lowe on SWORD:
>
> S.W.O.R.D. isn’t a wing or subsidiary of S.H.I.E.L.D. or the US gov’t. It’s a completely separate entity that has worked with S.H.I.E.L.D. on occasion. They’re an intergalactic peace-keeping organization that doesn’t operate under any government or world’s control. In ASTONISHING, Brand mentions to Maria Hill that the only reason that S.H.I.E.L.D. knows that S.W.O.R.D. exists is because of her relationship with Nick Fury.
>
> Possible solution- Rather than an inspection, Dugan’s reason for coming to the Peak (what the ship is called) could be one of a regular meeting they’ve set up to share information. It could still be special that it’s Dugan coming (maybe Maria Hill is the usual rep from S.H.I.E.L.D.) and I could imagine that Brand has a prior relationship with Dugan since she had one with Fury. And I could also imagine a few of the S.W.O.R.D. agents being really into meeting him.
>
> Agent Brand’s characterization- She’s not really an excited school girl. She’s a sarcastic, all-business, hard-ass who has little time for…anything, really. But, like I said before, I could see that she and Dugan might have a positive relationship. But we usually treat her like she’s the one with the knowledge. She doesn’t ask questions too much. One place in particular that I might ask for a simple change would be reversing the dialogue on pages 18-19 panel 5 so that the agent asks the question and Brand answers it. The only other thing that I might ask is that Brand, rather than radioing the Helicarrier, might be trying to radio S.W.O.R.D. HQ and it might be jammed by XXX XXXXXX.
>
> 2) Tony seems very casual about leaving the autopsy—which is about the most important thing he’s dealing with right now—to go chase the XXXXXX XXX, which is also important. So perhaps he should indicate that he’ll continue to monitor their progress remotely from his armor while en route, just so it doesn’t feel so much like he left two guys he can’t 100% trust alone with his only clue to the conspiracy. Also, a minor thing, you indicate that Tony has his helmet off in this scene, yet we see his POV from within the suit. So he should keep his helmet on for this to work.
>
> 3) Minor point on Page 12, Iron Fist has been in the Savage Land before, so maybe give this line to Echo.
>
> 4) I expect it’s all a matter of space, but Luke and company respond almost too quickly and too positively to XXXXXXX XXXX's call. They know XXXX stole the body and XXXX XX XXXXX XXXX XX, and they know they’re all wanted men, and that the Mighty Avengers have tried to ambush them at least once before. And yet, Luke immediately jumps to act on the info without even considering that this could be a set-up. So maybe what we need somewhere in here is a line that indicates that XXXX’s info might be shady, but that this is important enough to take the risk on.
>
> 5) The Marvel Boy scene in the Cube doesn’t really link up properly with where we left him at the end of CIVIL WAR. At that point, he had liberated himself, and taken over the Cube. I think this is easy enough to address, though—it just means that Marvel Boy isn’t in his cell when XXX XXXXX XXXX, but is instead in the Warden’s quarters, or some other place of authority. And maybe he needs some sort of “It’s time.” Kind of sentiment as he heads towards the hole in the wall and his destiny.
>
> 6) I’m not sure the connection between XXX XXX and XXXXX exploding connects clearly enough. All we see is XXX XXX XXXXXX XXX XXX XXX and then the base goes up. I think we need to see some sort of minor action—his pressing a button or something—that makes it a hair more obvious that he’s responsible for the detonation as a suicide bomber. Or even him saying “As it was written…” like the other Skrull agents.
>
> 7) When XXX XXXXXXXX XXXX is expanding into XXX XXXXXX XXXXXXXX, I think it would be a good idea to clarify the visual you’re looking for a little bit, so that Leinil draws the right thing. Are pieces of the building just disappearing, as though a bite has been taken out of them? Is there strange crackling XXXXX-energy seeming to consume parts of the building? How do you see this working?
>
> 8) Just to make sure that Leinil can draw it properly, in the sequence when the XXXXXX XXX opens and the XXXX XXXXXX come out, I think it would be helpful to specify when it’s X XXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX, XXXXXX XXXX XXX XXXXXXX XXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX.
>
> So far, so good!
>
> Tom B
>
>
>

> Hire Black Cat:
>
> and enter the current caption contest...
>
>


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emerick-man




May edit in more guesses...

> Looking at the image again, I'm convinced Spider-Woman is a Skrull.
>
> We know Iron Man isn't a Skrull, since that would negate Civil War (although give them just One More Day, and I bet they would)...... and Spider-Woman is clearly doing a seductive (and reversed gender) version of the serpent tempting Eve.
>
> I'll bet she's whispering sweet nothings in his ear, helping him see Skrulls where there are none, and none where there are Skrulls.
>
> > Citation:
> > Posté par Tom Breevort
> > Here’s some feedback on SECRET INVASION #1, all relatively easy stuff to nip and tuck. This issue came together nicely.
>
> Huh? Is the following stuff spoilers from Secret Invasion #1 or a different issue? I didn't even think the issue had been drawn yet.
>
>
> > 1) From Nick Lowe on SWORD:
> >
> > S.W.O.R.D. isn’t a wing or subsidiary of S.H.I.E.L.D. or the US gov’t. It’s a completely separate entity that has worked with S.H.I.E.L.D. on occasion. They’re an intergalactic peace-keeping organization that doesn’t operate under any government or world’s control. In ASTONISHING, Brand mentions to Maria Hill that the only reason that S.H.I.E.L.D. knows that S.W.O.R.D. exists is because of her relationship with Nick Fury.
> >
> > Possible solution- Rather than an inspection, Dugan’s reason for coming to the Peak (what the ship is called) could be one of a regular meeting they’ve set up to share information. It could still be special that it’s Dugan coming (maybe Maria Hill is the usual rep from S.H.I.E.L.D.) and I could imagine that Brand has a prior relationship with Dugan since she had one with Fury. And I could also imagine a few of the S.W.O.R.D. agents being really into meeting him.
> >
> > Agent Brand’s characterization- She’s not really an excited school girl. She’s a sarcastic, all-business, hard-ass who has little time for…anything, really. But, like I said before, I could see that she and Dugan might have a positive relationship. But we usually treat her like she’s the one with the knowledge. She doesn’t ask questions too much. One place in particular that I might ask for a simple change would be reversing the dialogue on pages 18-19 panel 5 so that the agent asks the question and Brand answers it.

-REALLY nice to see Agent Brand involved.
> > The only other thing that I might ask is that Brand, rather than radioing the Helicarrier, might be trying to radio S.W.O.R.D. HQ and it might be jammed by XXX XXXXXX.

THE SKRULLS
> >
> > 2) Tony seems very casual about leaving the autopsy—which is about the most important thing he’s dealing with right now—to go chase the XXXXXX XXX, which is also important. So perhaps he should indicate that he’ll continue to monitor their progress remotely from his armor while en route, just so it doesn’t feel so much like he left two guys he can’t 100% trust alone with his only clue to the conspiracy. Also, a minor thing, you indicate that Tony has his helmet off in this scene, yet we see his POV from within the suit. So he should keep his helmet on for this to work.

XXXXXX MEN
> >
> > 3) Minor point on Page 12, Iron Fist has been in the Savage Land before, so maybe give this line to Echo.
> >
> > 4) I expect it’s all a matter of space, but Luke and company respond almost too quickly and too positively to XXXXXXX XXXX's call. They know XXXX stole the body and XXXX XX XXXXX XXXX XX, and they know they’re all wanted men, and that the Mighty Avengers have tried to ambush them at least once before. And yet, Luke immediately jumps to act on the info without even considering that this could be a set-up. So maybe what we need somewhere in here is a line that indicates that XXXX’s info might be shady, but that this is important enough to take the risk on.

JESSICA DREW's; DREW stole the body, DREW's info
> >
> > 5) The Marvel Boy scene in the Cube doesn’t really link up properly with where we left him at the end of CIVIL WAR. At that point, he had liberated himself, and taken over the Cube. I think this is easy enough to address, though—it just means that Marvel Boy isn’t in his cell when XXX XXXXX XXXX, but is instead in the Warden’s quarters, or some other place of authority. And maybe he needs some sort of “It’s time.” Kind of sentiment as he heads towards the hole in the wall and his destiny.
> >
> > 6) I’m not sure the connection between XXX XXX and XXXXX exploding connects clearly enough. All we see is XXX XXX XXXXXX XXX XXX XXX and then the base goes up. I think we need to see some sort of minor action—his pressing a button or something—that makes it a hair more obvious that he’s responsible for the detonation as a suicide bomber. Or even him saying “As it was written…” like the other Skrull agents.
> >
> > 7) When XXX XXXXXXXX XXXX is expanding into XXX XXXXXX XXXXXXXX, I think it would be a good idea to clarify the visual you’re looking for a little bit, so that Leinil draws the right thing. Are pieces of the building just disappearing, as though a bite has been taken out of them? Is there strange crackling XXXXX-energy seeming to consume parts of the building? How do you see this working?

When THE NEGATIVE ZONE
IONIC-energy
> >
> > 8) Just to make sure that Leinil can draw it properly, in the sequence when the XXXXXX XXX opens and the XXXX XXXXXX come out, I think it would be helpful to specify when it’s X XXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX, XXXXXX XXXX XXX XXXXXXX XXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX.
> >
> > So far, so good!
> >
> > Tom B
> >
> >
> >

> > Hire Black Cat:
> >
> > and enter the current caption contest...
> >
> >


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Brand Echh




> > Looking at the image again, I'm convinced Spider-Woman is a Skrull.
> >
> > We know Iron Man isn't a Skrull, since that would negate Civil War (although give them just One More Day, and I bet they would)...... and Spider-Woman is clearly doing a seductive (and reversed gender) version of the serpent tempting Eve.
> >
> > I'll bet she's whispering sweet nothings in his ear, helping him see Skrulls where there are none, and none where there are Skrulls.

No comment on my theory?

now... let's play the x game...

> -REALLY nice to see Agent Brand involved.
> > > The only other thing that I might ask is that Brand, rather than radioing the Helicarrier, might be trying to radio S.W.O.R.D. HQ and it might be jammed by XXX XXXXXX.

> THE SKRULLS

Seems kinda silly to admit it's about Secret Invasion and then censor the word "Skrulls"... but it makes the most sense.

> > > 2) Tony seems very casual about leaving the autopsy—which is about the most important thing he’s dealing with right now—to go chase the XXXXXX XXX, which is also important. So perhaps he should indicate that he’ll continue to monitor their progress remotely from his armor while en route, just so it doesn’t feel so much like he left two guys he can’t 100% trust alone with his only clue to the conspiracy. Also, a minor thing, you indicate that Tony has his helmet off in this scene, yet we see his POV from within the suit. So he should keep his helmet on for this to work.

> XXXXXX MEN

Six X's? Is that like super-porn?

Or maybe it's the super-X-Men?

> > > 3) Minor point on Page 12, Iron Fist has been in the Savage Land before, so maybe give this line to Echo.

Good to see an editor catch that type of thing.

> > > 4) I expect it’s all a matter of space, but Luke and company respond almost too quickly and too positively to XXXXXXX XXXX's call. They know XXXX stole the body and XXXX XX XXXXX XXXX XX, and they know they’re all wanted men, and that the Mighty Avengers have tried to ambush them at least once before. And yet, Luke immediately jumps to act on the info without even considering that this could be a set-up. So maybe what we need somewhere in here is a line that indicates that XXXX’s info might be shady, but that this is important enough to take the risk on.

> JESSICA DREW's; DREW stole the body, DREW's info

Never seen anyone call her "Drew".... but I guess calling her Jessica could get confusing.

> > > 5) The Marvel Boy scene in the Cube doesn’t really link up properly with where we left him at the end of CIVIL WAR. At that point, he had liberated himself, and taken over the Cube. I think this is easy enough to address, though—it just means that Marvel Boy isn’t in his cell when XXX XXXXX XXXX, but is instead in the Warden’s quarters, or some other place of authority. And maybe he needs some sort of “It’s time.” Kind of sentiment as he heads towards the hole in the wall and his destiny.

THE XXXXX DIES?

THE EVENT XXXX?

> > > 6) I’m not sure the connection between XXX XXX and XXXXX exploding connects clearly enough. All we see is XXX XXX XXXXXX XXX XXX XXX and then the base goes up. I think we need to see some sort of minor action—his pressing a button or something—that makes it a hair more obvious that he’s responsible for the detonation as a suicide bomber. Or even him saying “As it was written…” like the other Skrull agents.



> > > 7) When XXX XXXXXXXX XXXX is expanding into XXX XXXXXX XXXXXXXX, I think it would be a good idea to clarify the visual you’re looking for a little bit, so that Leinil draws the right thing. Are pieces of the building just disappearing, as though a bite has been taken out of them? Is there strange crackling XXXXX-energy seeming to consume parts of the building? How do you see this working?
>
> When THE NEGATIVE ZONE

into THE MARVEL UNIVERSE

> IONIC-energy

> > > 8) Just to make sure that Leinil can draw it properly, in the sequence when the XXXXXX XXX opens and the XXXX XXXXXX come out, I think it would be helpful to specify when it’s X XXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX, XXXXXX XXXX XXX XXXXXXX XXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX.

Oh, well, obviously.




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emerick man




> > > Looking at the image again, I'm convinced Spider-Woman is a Skrull.
> > >
> > > We know Iron Man isn't a Skrull, since that would negate Civil War (although give them just One More Day, and I bet they would)...... and Spider-Woman is clearly doing a seductive (and reversed gender) version of the serpent tempting Eve.
> > >
> > > I'll bet she's whispering sweet nothings in his ear, helping him see Skrulls where there are none, and none where there are Skrulls.
>
> No comment on my theory?

Keeping an eye on her.
>
> now... let's play the x game...
>
> > -REALLY nice to see Agent Brand involved.
> > > > The only other thing that I might ask is that Brand, rather than radioing the Helicarrier, might be trying to radio S.W.O.R.D. HQ and it might be jammed by XXX XXXXXX.
>
> > THE SKRULLS
>
> Seems kinda silly to admit it's about Secret Invasion and then censor the word "Skrulls"... but it makes the most sense.
>
> > > > 2) Tony seems very casual about leaving the autopsy—which is about the most important thing he’s dealing with right now—to go chase the XXXXXX XXX, which is also important. So perhaps he should indicate that he’ll continue to monitor their progress remotely from his armor while en route, just so it doesn’t feel so much like he left two guys he can’t 100% trust alone with his only clue to the conspiracy. Also, a minor thing, you indicate that Tony has his helmet off in this scene, yet we see his POV from within the suit. So he should keep his helmet on for this to work.
>
> > XXXXXX MEN
>
> Six X's? Is that like super-porn?
>
> Or maybe it's the super-X-Men?
>
> > > > 3) Minor point on Page 12, Iron Fist has been in the Savage Land before, so maybe give this line to Echo.
>
> Good to see an editor catch that type of thing.

Agreed. Disappointing that she's still on the team and the the IF chronology is still unclear with his title ATM.
>
> > > > 4) I expect it’s all a matter of space, but Luke and company respond almost too quickly and too positively to XXXXXXX XXXX's call. They know XXXX stole the body and XXXX XX XXXXX XXXX XX, and they know they’re all wanted men, and that the Mighty Avengers have tried to ambush them at least once before. And yet, Luke immediately jumps to act on the info without even considering that this could be a set-up. So maybe what we need somewhere in here is a line that indicates that XXXX’s info might be shady, but that this is important enough to take the risk on.
>
> > JESSICA DREW's; DREW stole the body, DREW's info
>
> Never seen anyone call her "Drew".... but I guess calling her Jessica could get confusing.
>
> > > > 5) The Marvel Boy scene in the Cube doesn’t really link up properly with where we left him at the end of CIVIL WAR. At that point, he had liberated himself, and taken over the Cube. I think this is easy enough to address, though—it just means that Marvel Boy isn’t in his cell when XXX XXXXX XXXX, but is instead in the Warden’s quarters, or some other place of authority. And maybe he needs some sort of “It’s time.” Kind of sentiment as he heads towards the hole in the wall and his destiny.
>
> THE XXXXX DIES?
>
> THE EVENT XXXX?
>
> > > > 6) I’m not sure the connection between XXX XXX and XXXXX exploding connects clearly enough. All we see is XXX XXX XXXXXX XXX XXX XXX and then the base goes up. I think we need to see some sort of minor action—his pressing a button or something—that makes it a hair more obvious that he’s responsible for the detonation as a suicide bomber. Or even him saying “As it was written…” like the other Skrull agents.
>
>
>
> > > > 7) When XXX XXXXXXXX XXXX is expanding into XXX XXXXXX XXXXXXXX, I think it would be a good idea to clarify the visual you’re looking for a little bit, so that Leinil draws the right thing. Are pieces of the building just disappearing, as though a bite has been taken out of them? Is there strange crackling XXXXX-energy seeming to consume parts of the building? How do you see this working?
> >
> > When THE NEGATIVE ZONE
>
> into THE MARVEL UNIVERSE

Very likely.
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> > IONIC-energy
>
> > > > 8) Just to make sure that Leinil can draw it properly, in the sequence when the XXXXXX XXX opens and the XXXX XXXXXX come out, I think it would be helpful to specify when it’s X XXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXXXXXX, XXXXXX XXXX XXX XXXXXXX XXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XX XXXX XXXXX.
>
> Oh, well, obviously.
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>

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> > > 2) Tony seems very casual about leaving the autopsy—which is
> > > about the most important thing he’s dealing with right now—to go
> > > chase the XXXXXX XXX, which is also important. So perhaps he
> > > should indicate that he’ll continue to monitor their progress
> > > remotely from his armor while en route, just so it doesn’t feel
> > > so much like he left two guys he can’t 100% trust alone with his
> > > only clue to the conspiracy. Also, a minor thing, you indicate
> > > that Tony has his helmet off in this scene, yet we see his POV
> > > from within the suit. So he should keep his helmet on for this to
> > > work.
>
> XXXXXX MEN

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Leonard




An EVIL impossible man would be much, much worse than the Skrulls.

Apart from the ability to take any shape that is needed instantly, they breed asexually and really, really fast. Even one of them could overrun the planet in a day.

Brrrr...


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