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Subj: You gave him too much credit
Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2021 at 10:31:57 am EST (Viewed 211 times)
Reply Subj: A brief history of Norvell's critiques of Cates
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2021 at 09:59:12 am EST (Viewed 315 times)

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My Welcome to Cates:

My suggestion on how Cates can improve:

Issue #3 Bullet-Point Review:

(Funny, LGDB participates in these threads but mysteriously doesn't remember substantive critiques. HUH).

Issue #4 Bullet-Point Review:

Issue #5 Break-Down (trying my hardest to like Cates' stories):

Issue #6 Break down:

Issue #7 Break down:

And, oh look, me having the exact same discussion with Mod-Blake as we're having now, despite Mod-Blake being present throughout my entire substantive-critiquing history on these forums:

Decompressed - check
Deconstructed - check
Illogical Plot Holes - check
180 degree characterization - check
Actual Heroism in short supply - check
Rubbish Fights - check

The only thing Cates has done well is Thor's power showing - which got the battleboards (are they even still a thing? ) fanboys on his side.

In all other respects he is Aaron-lite with none of that writers shock/mystery; snake-oil salesman expertise.

Your little spat with LGDB is amusing though; makes me think of two antifa supporters arguing; where one is trying to convince the other Portland is still a great place to live.

You address Omnipotence...tread carefully.
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